Melanie, Good start. A few things to consider. Build more anticipation before you reveal the first two circles. Can the circles build in a way that is consistent with the way you build it up again later? The animation can be much faster overall. When that line slices the circle in half 6 seconds into the animation, the line is barely visible. The counter of the D can move faster to its position. Once there, I can sort of see a white D showing up but not so much. I am not sure what is happening. I like the transition to the white but maybe the drop shadow behind it needs to be more prominent. The speed at which the camera zooms out 20 seconds into the composition is the perfect speed. Save a new version when you make these revisions. Also. When you move keyframes from 1 layer, you need to move keyframes for the other layers respectively. try it out and you will see what I mean.
Melanie,
ReplyDeleteGood start. A few things to consider. Build more anticipation before you reveal the first two circles. Can the circles build in a way that is consistent with the way you build it up again later?
The animation can be much faster overall. When that line slices the circle in half 6 seconds into the animation, the line is barely visible.
The counter of the D can move faster to its position. Once there, I can sort of see a white D showing up but not so much. I am not sure what is happening. I like the transition to the white but maybe the drop shadow behind it needs to be more prominent. The speed at which the camera zooms out 20 seconds into the composition is the perfect speed.
Save a new version when you make these revisions. Also. When you move keyframes from 1 layer, you need to move keyframes for the other layers respectively. try it out and you will see what I mean.